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I don't know
The words
To this song,
But I'll sing it
All night long,
And I'll look
In the mirror
And see a pretty face,
But it's not mine,
And I don't think
You can
Save me
This time.
It's not fun
Being all alone,
But listen to the song,
It'll take you home.
Away from here,
Away from this place,
Away from me,
Away from this scarred face.
I don't think you'll miss me,
But sometimes,
Just maybe,
You will,
And the reflection,
My reflection,
Is so disappointed
In me,
And I'm hiding things
That you can't see,
Because your blind,
But I'm deaf
And we're all just a mess.
Someday I want to be free,
Away from the girl that's me,
But this song has a melody,
And it doesn't flow like that,
So  all I'll leave behind
Is my favorite hat,
It still smells like
My coconut shampoo,
And you'll remember me
When I remember you.
No, my shampoo is no coconut.
It used to be though. Now it's just shampoo smelling shampoo.
:D

I don't think I've ever told you this but I freakin' hate tags.
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Zaccat Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009

You hate tags! I kinda do too


Anyway, this was interesting to see, it's a lot different from what you normally write :D

And I'm hiding things
That you can't see,
Because your blind,
But I'm deaf
And we're all just a mess.
Someday I want to be free,
Away from the girl that's me


I just love that bit the most. It all just seems to fit together
And the part where it's like "My reflection is so disappointed in me" is also really cool
-feels like a total idiot in her comments-
BARKARAJGKAGJARk but I like this one :)

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Avalon928810 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
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Yay! Comment!
:D
It was actually technically a song, I just, you know, forgot the tune. It wasn't very good either. :P
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Zaccat Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009
:iconlelouchplz:!
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